Talk:Hemochromatosis 2012
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- Though this site focuses on hereditary hemochromatosis (hemochromatosis type 1) it is worth noting, that there are differrent types of hemochromatosis.
Did you mean: Though this site focuses on hereditary hemochromatosis (hemochromatosis type 1) it is worth mentioning, that there are different types of hemochromatosis. [Julia]
- Maybe you should try to start less sentences with "Hereditary hemochromatosis ..." [Julia]