Talk:Hemochromatosis 2011

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  • some hints on (English) writing:
    • in written speech, you do not abbreviate as in "is not" (not isn't), "do not" (not don't), ...
    • read your text after writing: e.g. mangled sentence in section "diagnosis"

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