Difference between revisions of "Talk:Tay-Sachs Disease 2012"
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| − | * For table 1 in section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses ", the explanation to the columns could be in a separate paragraph. Adding visible table border might be better. |
+ | * For table 1 in section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses ", the explanation to the columns could be in a separate paragraph. Adding visible table border might be better (get help here [http://www.mediawiki.org/wiki/Help:Tables]). |
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Revision as of 21:19, 23 April 2012
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The text is well organized, with comprehensive information about this disease.
Format
- For table 1 in section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses ", the explanation to the columns could be in a separate paragraph. Adding visible table border might be better (get help here [1]).
Content
- Adding an image of the "Cherry-red" or some pictures of the symptoms might give the readers an intuitive impression of the disease.
- In section "Prevalence ", maybe add some statistic about the disease frequency of the Ashkenazi Jews and eastern Quebec French Canadians population.
- In section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses", a short explanation of "sphingolipidoses" might be helpful.
