Difference between revisions of "Talk:Tay-Sachs Disease 2012"
From Bioinformatikpedia
(→Feedback) |
(→Content) |
||
| Line 14: | Line 14: | ||
* Adding an image of the "Cherry-red" or some pictures of the symptoms might give the readers an intuitive impression of the disease. |
* Adding an image of the "Cherry-red" or some pictures of the symptoms might give the readers an intuitive impression of the disease. |
||
| − | * In "Prevalence " |
+ | * In section "Prevalence ", maybe add some statistic about the disease frequency of the Ashkenazi Jews and eastern Quebec French Canadians population. |
| + | * In section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses", a short explanation of "sphingolipidoses" might be helpful. |
||
Revision as of 22:12, 23 April 2012
Open for criticism
coming soon
Feedback
The text is well organized, with comprehensive information about this disease.
Format
- For table 1 in section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses ", the explanation to the columns could be in a separate paragraph. Adding visible table border might be better.
Content
- Adding an image of the "Cherry-red" or some pictures of the symptoms might give the readers an intuitive impression of the disease.
- In section "Prevalence ", maybe add some statistic about the disease frequency of the Ashkenazi Jews and eastern Quebec French Canadians population.
- In section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses", a short explanation of "sphingolipidoses" might be helpful.
