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The text is well organized, with comprehensive information about this disease.
 
The text is well organized, with comprehensive information about this disease.
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* For table 1 in section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses ", the explanation to the columns could be in a separate paragraph. Adding visible table border might be better.
   
 
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Revision as of 21:09, 23 April 2012

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The text is well organized, with comprehensive information about this disease.

Format

  • For table 1 in section "Distinction to other sphingolipidoses ", the explanation to the columns could be in a separate paragraph. Adding visible table border might be better.

Content

  • Adding an image of the "Cherry-red" or some pictures of the symptoms might give the readers an intuitive impression of the disease.
  • In "Prevalence " section, maybe add some statistic about the disease frequency of the Ashkenazi Jews and eastern Quebec French Canadians population.