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Though this site focuses on hereditary hemochromatosis (hemochromatosis type 1) it is worth '''mentioning''', that there are different types of hemochromatosis. [Julia]
 
Though this site focuses on hereditary hemochromatosis (hemochromatosis type 1) it is worth '''mentioning''', that there are different types of hemochromatosis. [Julia]
# Maybe you should try to start less sentences with "Hereditary hemochromatosis ..." [Julia]
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# Maybe you should try starting less sentences with "Hereditary hemochromatosis ..." [Julia]
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# In '''Reference Sequence''', I like that you highlighted the positions of known mutations in red.

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  1. Though this site focuses on hereditary hemochromatosis (hemochromatosis type 1) it is worth noting, that there are differrent types of hemochromatosis.

Did you mean: Though this site focuses on hereditary hemochromatosis (hemochromatosis type 1) it is worth mentioning, that there are different types of hemochromatosis. [Julia]

  1. Maybe you should try starting less sentences with "Hereditary hemochromatosis ..." [Julia]
  2. In Reference Sequence, I like that you highlighted the positions of known mutations in red.