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| + | * some hints on (English) writing: |
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| − | * in written speach, you do not abbreviate as in "is not" (not isn't), "do not" (not don't), ... |
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| + | ** in written speech, you do not abbreviate as in "is not" (not isn't), "do not" (not don't), ... |
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| − | * read your text after writing: e.g. mangled sentence in section "diagnosis" |
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| + | ** read your text after writing: e.g. mangled sentence in section "diagnosis" |
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| + | ** "must not" has the meaning that something is not allowed; what you mean is "need not" |
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| + | ** "alleviate" is probably not what you meant (context e.g. 'to alleviate the pain following surgery') -> "reduce" |
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Latest revision as of 10:28, 29 March 2012
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- some hints on (English) writing:
- in written speech, you do not abbreviate as in "is not" (not isn't), "do not" (not don't), ...
- read your text after writing: e.g. mangled sentence in section "diagnosis"
- "must not" has the meaning that something is not allowed; what you mean is "need not"
- "alleviate" is probably not what you meant (context e.g. 'to alleviate the pain following surgery') -> "reduce"
